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Don't Put Me In The Kitchen
Contributed by
needledancing
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Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 02:27:15 PM in AEST
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Let me in for a moment it shouldn't take too long,
A simple equation that's coming in a song.
A recipe for life that could be quite delicous,
if love is the stove and you are just the dishes.
Chorus
Put yourself on simmer and add no sugar honey,
Your the dish that's cooking and life will be the money.
Can't buy any joy in life ,if you just buy your things.
Life is what your tossing in and let's see what that brings.
I'm not much on cooking things but life is for the baker.
To much stir or too much heat can take you to your maker.
Follow all that recipe or you can spoil the batter.
Clean the bowls and scrub the mess from all the walls you splatter.
Chorus
Put yourself on simmer and add no sugar honey,
Your the dish that's cooking and life will be the money.
Can't buy any joy in life ,if you just buy your things.
Life is what your tossing in and let's see what that brings.
Now don't stay in the kitchen if your overheated please,
Wash your hands, grease your pans and heavens don't dare sneeze.
If your cooking project should fail by ill laid plans.
Find another cook book and replace all burned up pans.
Chorus
Put yourself on simmer and add no sugar honey,
Your the dish that's cooking and life will be the money.
Can't buy any joy in life ,if you just buy your things.
Life is what your tossing in and let's see what that brings.
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needledancing
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Re: Don't Put Me In The Kitchen
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 04:59:27 PM AEST
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A very clever write, indeed. Very cool how you used cooking as a metaphor for life and it's happenings. Some wisdom in that tune of yours. Thanks for sharing.
Peace and hugs,
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Re: Don't Put Me In The Kitchen
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 12:48:53 AM AEST
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I am in complete agreement with laura .. there is much wisdom
to be found within your words. What a keen observation, that life
could be viewed metaphorically through cooking. Wow.
Exceptional, ND. This was a delightful read.
Entirely ~
~Breezy |
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Re: Don't Put Me In The Kitchen
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 02:56:35 AM AEST
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a very well written piece.. I agree with what laura said in her comment about the metaphor for life.. awesome job.. I like the anime pic you used too.. very cool
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Don't Put Me In The Kitchen
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 12:54:40 PM AEST
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creative and clever,
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Don't Put Me In The Kitchen
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 02:20:00 PM AEST
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Hummm, think i'll put some music to it lol.if you wouldn'd mind lol. what a lovely statement in a song. very nice ND as always you culinary diva you lol.
((((ND))))
Ben |
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Re: Don't Put Me In The Kitchen
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by FRANCO on
Saturday, 9th June 2007 @ 11:20:45 PM AEST
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You have written this poem with wisdom and vision,
with flawless flow to it.
wonderful write.
FRANCO |
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Re: Don't Put Me In The Kitchen
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 01:19:21 PM AEST
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ND,
Love the words and the sentiment expecially adore the metaphor. Quite a wonderful flow to your *song*. A great job as always.
BRAVO!
SCM |
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Re: Don't Put Me In The Kitchen
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by doug on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 03:41:47 AM AEST
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A clever poem. I always like see new
ideas and new ways to compare things.
It always gives a fresh perspective.
Great work , Truly , Doug |
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