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Hearts to Hold
Contributed by
needledancing
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Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 01:53:20 PM in AEST
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I dance to the rhythm of life, with shoes worn and torn for my time.
I sail through the vibrating energy fields and I claim the understanding is mine.
Whatever the happy and sad of it all when it comes to the end of the day,
Be sure after feeling the flow of the tide, I'm sending a healing your way.
For if love is a friend and compassion can rule and a heart is the leader of man.
I'll be holding your sorrow and joy for tomorrow right here in the sacred of hand.
Leap in the belief that we're all sheltered here ,by the hearts of the souls up above.
The older we grow, the wiser we know all the saints that will guide us in love.
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needledancing
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Re: Hearts to Hold
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 05:02:08 PM AEST
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Oh, I really loved this write. It has so much hope in it. I thought the last line brilliant...
"The older we grow, the wiser we know all the saints that will guide us in love."
What lovely thoughts you have displayed.
Peace and hugs,
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Re: Hearts to Hold
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 12:40:57 AM AEST
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ND, your heart is a vast ocean of caring and love. This was
beautiful, hun. Truly beautiful. The metre and rhyme scheme
made it flow so wonderfully and the sentiments conveyed
were absolute and filled with a truth I wish more would embrace.
Stunning work, my poet friend!
Flawless ~
~Breezy |
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Re: Hearts to Hold
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by Dom on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 01:33:40 AM AEST
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I agree with Breezy that the rhythm and metre make this poem work wonderfully and make it into a song.
This poem shows what a wonderful and caring person you are, it was lovely to read. Your words are wise and hopeful and I really enjoyed visiting your page today.
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: Hearts to Hold
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 02:18:28 AM AEST
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The pic and the words stand out on the page, the way you wrote this just dances, you are talented and thanks for the beautiful message and warmth.
Michelle |
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Re: Hearts to Hold
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 03:47:14 AM AEST
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a lovely pic to go with a beautifully inspired write.. the words have such an enchanting flow.. this is absoluetely breathtaking with hope.. thanks for sharing
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Hearts to Hold
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 11:09:10 AM AEST
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ND,
WOW! A great work again and let me explain.... The sentiment is brilliant and adorable. But let me for a moment focus on the bread of this delicious poetic sandwhich. The first line and the ending line....WOW amazing! Not at all taking away from the meat for it is just as tasty. But what an amazing opening line. It caught me, swept me away in the rest and then dropped me off in the ending line leaving me with the knowledge I had experienced something and the desire to experience it again.
BRILLIANT!
SCM |
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Re: Hearts to Hold
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 12:50:47 PM AEST
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beautiful, flowing and precious,
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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Re: Hearts to Hold
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 02:25:42 PM AEST
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The older we grow, the wiser we know all the saints that will guide us in love.
what a touching line. beautifuly expressed and so meaningful. I love your poetry each and every one. no exception, thank's for sharing them . . .
((((ND))))
Ben
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Re: Hearts to Hold
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by iodinelove on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 03:08:54 PM AEST
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Now we get Anime?
You're not gonna start with music are you?
I'd hate to have to turn you down.
Everybody else wrote everything else to say about this-
So i figured i'd ***** about the anime.
it doesn't sound like a very good idea anymore...
Well done.
^_^ Always, Abraham
(and yes; ^_^ is an anime face...
but still- anime...)
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Re: Hearts to Hold
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by AirHead on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 08:37:20 PM AEST
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| Beautiful, gives me hope a saint will guide me |
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Re: Hearts to Hold
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by Thespia on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 01:29:24 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written, a lovely message for everyone. Thank you for shairing such a wonderful piece! |
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