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The Most Depressed Man in the Whole World
Contributed by
mangos
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Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 08:14:12 AM in AEST
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Unhappiness fails to adequately describe the disposition of a complex and intricate feeling such as deep self loathing.
Everything is affected. Relationships- desire- aspiration. Everything becomes tangled. Motivation yields to outbursts driven by uninspired hate for the common occurrence. Complaints go unnoticed. There is no assurance, for a sustainable, intact ego, so, a viable option, is to just let go.
Life is further complicated by reason, disputed with logic, obscured by repression, denial, implicit regression, a volatile affection, a contained expression, of fatigue, intrigued, unmoved, stimulated, enthused, unable to refuse, the onslaught of perfection.
Where is the compassion? The comfort of another’s embrace. A tirade, a glimpse at a smiling face… making a wish. Blowing out candles of innocence.
More importantly, with greater significance, remarkably, out of the ordinary, a spit in the face of bliss, impossible to have imagined or later interpreted, intercepted, eliminated it, before a catastrophic risk. Shattering the harmony, the light flickers and burns out with the mist. A death star, imploding on itself. The fornication is tempting and difficult to resist.
Properly placed-
and misdiagnosed.
Unhealthy personality,
a healthy dosage through an acute nose.
If you have the answers to the questions I have yet to propose…
Ignore the cliché-
Love does not cure all,
A sunny day
He still watches the rain fall
Copyright ©
mangos
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2007-06-05 08:14:12]
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Re: The Most Depressed Man in the Whole World
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 05:05:50 PM AEST
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Wow, a very impressive release of your feelings. I liked how you penned this piece, it made for a wonderful read. Loads of rhyming that easily rolled off the tongue. Your ending was fantastic.
Thanks for sharing.
Peace,
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Re: The Most Depressed Man in the Whole World
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 01:25:05 AM AEST
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Well holy HECK, M!!!!
That last line just sums it all up, doesn't it? How amazingly insightful.
Yes, many thoughts in here to ponder and contemplate. (Incidently,
I believe love does, in fact, cure all. But only the love for one's self!
So yeah, your opening line, is just brilliant!!)
exceptional, as always!!
~Breezy |
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Re: The Most Depressed Man in the Whole World
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by Dom on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 02:20:38 AM AEST
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Wow, this poem is astoundingly heart-shattering, it grabs you and makes you listen and understand.
Powerful words, such raw emotions are displayed here.
Very well written,
Dom |
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Re: The Most Depressed Man in the Whole World
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 01:33:23 PM AEST
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Love the ending in particular, but the content as a whole hits home on so many levels. Straight from the heart this is, and painstaking to read for that very same reason. Great post.
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