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pale whisper
Contributed by
shadow
on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 02:50:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Are you the dreams of midnight
dark, pale and bright
the sweet fallen breath that rides the wind
the phantom that beacons in the night
the fallen hopes as a ascend
into the dreams of my own vanity
Is this the pale hand of love
the goddess I worship, the ideal I praise
are these her fiery eyes arisen
the ones of dreams that leaves me dazed
Is this the hope I have long forbidden
the demon I have long kept at bay
To know you smirk O forgotten myth
Ye banshie of the emerald shore
Is the feel the claws of a faith thrown down
A fruitless banner I shall hold no more
Though the sky may crack and moon shall frown
The call of night shall I hear no more
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2007-06-04 14:50:54]
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Re: pale whisper
(User Rating: 1 )
by Chamaron on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 04:27:16 PM AEST
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| Positively beautifully written. The imagery woven delicately within speaks volumes. |
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Re: pale whisper
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by Dom on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 11:44:45 PM AEST
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This poem touched me because I have experienced very similar feelings.
Nicely written,
Take care,
Dom |
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