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Just Be Real :
Contributed by
richard_campbell
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Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 12:37:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm real for saying how i feel
am not the one faking ,
expressing one's love is an appeal.
why won't you just be real.
stop the fake love and show me how you feel
or am walking out that door
for-good i scream.
i am the one being real.
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2007-06-04 12:37:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Just Be Real :
(User Rating: 1 ) by books_4gal on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 07:42:53 AM AEST (User
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What grabbed my eye was your tag line about 'not settling for less', the poem however summarizes a growing epidemic in this world, to me it seems we've become a people afraid to be real, to have real feelings about anything.
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Re: Just Be Real :
(User Rating: 1 ) by books_4gal on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 07:43:08 AM AEST (User
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What grabbed my eye was your tag line about 'not settling for less', the poem however summarizes a growing epidemic in this world, to me it seems we've become a people afraid to be real, to have real feelings about anything.
I enjoyed you message. |
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Re: Just Be Real :
(User Rating: 1 ) by books_4gal on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 07:44:53 AM AEST (User
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What grabbed my eye was your tag line about 'not settling for less', the poem however summarizes a growing epidemic in this world, to me it seems we've become a people afraid to be real, to have real feelings about anything.
I enjoyed you message. |
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Re: Just Be Real :
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 12:26:48 PM AEST (User
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richard this is so fresh and alive, a fabulous piece:)
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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