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While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 07:03:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I look at you and still sometime's
i can't believe your real,
like you and i were born in love
how beautiful we
feel.
Amidst
the darkness of the night
when all the world''s
asleep,
in
my heart you fit so right
'tis there your love i
keep.
Here we are
just you and i close enough to kiss,
the moon is dreaming in the sky
while shaddows
reminisce.
Perhaps he''s dreaming
of her love
that would explain his glow,
for if she's anything like you
how he must love her
so.
Yes
here we are
just me and you caught up
in love's sweet
bliss,
upon a star where dreams come true
while shaddow
reminisce.
Ben
Copyright ©
myheartsvoice
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2007-06-04 07:03:49]
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Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 08:27:18 AM AEST
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What a beautiful write..It flows so nice...Another excellent ...
Blessing to you & your...
C.S |
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Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben
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by needledancing on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 01:13:22 PM AEST
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| Another excellent proclamation of love flows from our cupid poet.Well done Ben. |
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Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 03:33:50 PM AEST
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You two got it going on.
Awesome work.
big huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben
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by CuttersAngel on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 05:21:19 PM AEST
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| i really enjoy reading your work. i love the way you rhyme. i give you alot of respect. keep up on your awsome writings. |
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Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 01:14:08 AM AEST
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Beautiful Ben, you two are some lucky folks....I wish you the best always.
Peace and hugs,
Your hippie sis |
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Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 02:11:32 AM AEST
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Ben,
each one of your writes radiate such love and romance, may that love always sing within your hearts and souls.
Michelle |
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Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 12:24:30 PM AEST
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so beautiful!
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben
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by Dom on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 05:13:00 PM AEST
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I really like the idea of "while shadows reminisce".
So romantic and wih wonderful rhythm (as always!)
Lovely,
Dom |
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Re: While Shaddows Reminisce . . . Ben
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 03:59:56 PM AEST
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"the moon is dreaming in the sky
while shaddows
reminisce."~you
Incredibly lyrical...I could do some gorgeous writing w/ this verse as a starting point, hmm...
BigLoveMuchPeace
~me
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