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The Mind of Silence
Contributed by
Chamaron
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Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 06:04:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
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All I get from you is negative attention,
Like an overdose on detention.
You ignore when you don't care,
But throw in an insult or two to be fair.
You never praise with good intention
For fear of a happiness convention.
You take away my reasons to exist,
And gladly watch insanity persist.
You push for a bad reaction,
But you expect magical inaction.
Your hypocrisy you ignore everyday,
And I'm supposed to say it's just your way.
Through my struggle, you continue to win,
I bet you're glad to see my confidence wearing thin.
As I slowly fill the emptiness of confession
With the cold fog of depression.
I don't think I'll sleep anymore,
For, anyway, my future looks poor.
I wait hungrily for something that will never come,
A bit of your understanding, the size of my thumb.
Human needs are of want, too
Daresay I'll never be loved by you.
But it's okay, tragic story to tell
How for many more years, I get to rot in hell.
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2007-06-03 18:04:25]
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Re: The Mind of Silence
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 07:44:49 PM AEST
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Sad but awesome writing.
huggs,
emy
Hope you feel better very soon. |
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Re: The Mind of Silence
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 4th June 2007 @ 02:57:59 AM AEST
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I'm with Emy here. This is powerfully moving...so sad and bitter, but penned very well. Excellent write.
Peace, Laura |
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