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Knight in Shining Armor
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 02:21:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I want to wander away
if only in my mind
a luscious green valley
and crystal river I'll find
Grass thick and greener
than I've ever seen before
Trees so tall and majestic
reach high from the forest floor
I follow a path of stones
that through the woods meander
moss lines the path like carpet
to bare feet... feels so tender
Twisting around rock cliff walls
Seeing birds wing so high
Breathing fresh clean air
Lost in a clear blue sky
Hiking freely with the wind
the fortress walls I finally reach
Ancient stone of the castle
and I...we finally meet
Who abides inside these walls?
Who is the keeper of the key?
Mayhap a knight in shining armor
Waiting there for me....
6-02-07
Laura Horner
*thanks to Crow...for the "knight in shining armor" idea....much appreciated, my friend...*
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Re: Knight in Shining Armor
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 02:29:56 PM AEST
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A beautiful imaginary... took me to the dark ages in history...when knights in shining armors romanced the land.
Brilliant write.
FRANCO. |
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Re: Knight in Shining Armor
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 11:22:30 PM AEST
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My dear DH .. only one who is in full connection with her
emotions could write of such a fantastical place. Sounds dreamy,
sis. The imagery in this was so vividly beautiful, I could picture
myself there ... I could hear the birds, feel the lushness of the
grass, smell the freshness of the crystal river!! WOW!!
Excellent job, sis.
Stunning!!
~MG |
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Re: Knight in Shining Armor
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 5th June 2007 @ 08:59:00 AM AEST
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| Laura, maybe one gains strength if you are reasured there are still knights" out and about. your a sweetie" love the write. Vincent |
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Re: Knight in Shining Armor
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 12:08:21 PM AEST
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breathtakingly beautiful,
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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