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Easy
Contributed by
crow
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Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 07:17:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Times you beg for relief
at any price, times one
minute more.
Days you harbor
so close to your soul,
years you have let go by.
Dust off all your worldly
possessions, hurry to love
once more.
all the heart
you `ve given or taken
has tired you
clear to the bone.
Easy to rest from the distance,
measure the day that folds,
easy to cry, easy to smile,
nothing here is won or lost..Vincent
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crow
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2007-06-01 07:17:16]
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Re: Easy
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by saralind21 on
Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 08:16:46 AM AEST
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I like the line:
"Days you harbor
so close to your soul,
years you have let go by."
This poem is short but it says so much. Its very good. |
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Re: Easy
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by shelby on
Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 09:47:32 AM AEST
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This my friend is perfect, I loved it
Michelle |
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Re: Easy
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by brew on
Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 12:13:58 PM AEST
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WOnderful write, I LOVED IT....Well penned..always a pleasure to read your posts.
Smiles :D
Brew~ |
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Re: Easy
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 01:26:14 PM AEST
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Aw dammit. Here you are saying so much again with a brevity of words. It's like in one stanza, you can write about a lifetime. The first stanza my heart knows all too well. Stanza two, damn, I feel you there. The third stanza almost felt like you felt some hope in all of this.
You summed it all up perfectly at the end. I think you've had an interesting life my friend, with many more "stories to tell". I' m listening.
Thank you for sharing this.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Easy
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd June 2007 @ 12:41:16 AM AEST
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An easy feel to it, but with an awful lot of depth!
Great combination! |
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Re: Easy
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 11:34:12 PM AEST
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Vincent, my friend, you have an uncanny ability to command
an emotion to spread itself across the page in the form of words.
Wow! There is a sadness, a longing and even a slight hope
in this. The last line, (as several of your last lines do), stirred
many a thought in me. Exceptional writing, my friend.
~Breezy |
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Re: Easy
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 10:55:50 AM AEST
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beautiful, peaceful, full of acceptance and truth,
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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