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Beneath the Waking Moon
Contributed by
fadingaway
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Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 05:43:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I'll howl to you my sorrow,
Beneath the waxing moon,
I'll spare you till tomorrow,
Wrapped in love's cacoon,
I'll drowned the light with blackness,
And this gift that I have found,
When all has turned to madness,
In you own blood shall you drownd,
Those orbs that you see watching,
Are not lights in the sky,
This dark path that you walking,
Beneath the stalkers eye,
The howl is here to warn you,
Jaws are closing soon,
Death has come to find you,
It's barking at the moon,
I howl to you in sorrow,
Beneath the waking moon,
I spared you till tomorrow,
Encircled the inpending doom,
Silver shiver run down your spine,
They say your out of time,
I howled to you in sorrow,
And now I've come to dine.
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Re: Beneath the Waking Moon
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by Dimes on
Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 09:15:18 AM AEST
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| I like this one. The rhyme pattern you used was effective, and enhanced the overall presentation of it. I especially liked the last stanza. Brilliant! |
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Re: Beneath the Waking Moon
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by shelby on
Friday, 1st June 2007 @ 11:44:02 AM AEST
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The flow of this write fit it perfectly. The entire write is chilling and the ending chilling and solid, great work.
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Re: Beneath the Waking Moon
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Saturday, 2nd June 2007 @ 01:07:56 AM AEST
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Well written poem. I liked the title. You did a great job intertwining thoughts and emotions along with darkness and nature.. Well done.
Take care
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Re: Beneath the Waking Moon
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 09:25:05 AM AEST
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One word ... C.R.E.E.P.Y.
wow. I was drawn by the title, (as I am a child of the moon), but
what a wicked surprise I got when I opened this up! A very
dark and chilling write, full of shadows and mystery.
Excellent post!
~Breezy |
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