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Sweet Tears
Contributed by
FRANCO
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Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 10:32:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Fierce inferno roared within,
fusion of sorrow and envy as a fuel, I fumed
as she strolled with her newfound
love - to be bond in her wedlock.
Just the day gone by, warmness of her
tenderness yet warm over my chest,
whispering promises of desire vibrant in my
ears; now, vaporized like a distant dream that gone by.
Sopping tears drowned my sinking heart,
as she planted her passionate kiss on his lips
echoed her voice within, “money talks sweetie”
crashing my soul to fragments.
Fighting a bloody battle in my heart,
braving a smile on my face my fingers
balled into a hard fist, heart though blessed her best;
seizing back the rolling tears with a wide smile.
Love - a divine instrument of sacrifice;
tears shed for love is sweeter then celestial nectar.
-FRANCO-
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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Re: Sweet Tears
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 01:57:31 AM AEST
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a very well penned out expressive emotional piece. you can feel the sadness and emotion in this .. great job
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Re: Sweet Tears
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 02:15:04 AM AEST
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Hi franco,
wow! i know the feeling
my friend you sure know how to write your
feeling down.this is full with hurt ,emotion and love.excellent my friend.
keep up the good write. |
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Re: Sweet Tears
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by Dom on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 02:57:49 AM AEST
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Oh Franco, this is such a sad tale! Your words are, as always beautiful and emotional, and I got really involved with this poem.
Lovely write,
Dom |
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Re: Sweet Tears
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 03:53:32 AM AEST
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Beautifully written out and powerful and deep. You did a wonderful job expressing yourself and what that made you feel like.. Well done..
Take care
*hugs*
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Re: Sweet Tears
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 06:49:26 AM AEST
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| A superb and verbally explosive write of pain and emotion. Well done |
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Re: Sweet Tears
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by brew on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 12:15:45 PM AEST
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Wonderful write you penned, but sad.....But hey we all have to move on. I loved how you were very expressive to all.......Love reading your writes, I dont always , comment.I know Im bad.
Brew~ |
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Re: Sweet Tears
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 02:05:03 PM AEST
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A very heart tugging write. Many...too many of us can relate to. You have expressed the feelings well in your poem.
Peace,
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Re: Sweet Tears
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd June 2007 @ 01:32:10 AM AEST
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Franco, this was so painfully gripping. It ripped my heart
out! I adore the last line. Holy WOW! Now THAT is poetic.
Damn fine, my friend. I know not if this is real or imagined,
or if the pain in this is lingering or fresh, but I do hope that
all is well.
There is a magnificence that grips our hearts when faced with
a travesty, that begats the most poetic outpourings ...
outstanding, my friend. Truly!!
~Breezy |
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Re: Sweet Tears
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 10:30:03 AM AEST
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omg how beautifully bittersweet! so sad! so alive! real and just a fabulous write!
love n' hugs nessa
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Re: Sweet Tears
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 03:24:13 PM AEST
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Franco~
a sad, painful and emotive write my friend. It's been awhile since I last visited your pages and I do apologize.
A heart breaking write. Wishing your pained heart healing my friend. A touching very well penned write.
Here's to much brighter days my friend.
*huge hugs*
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