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The Last Half of a Journey is Leaving
Contributed by
TheSpiritx
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Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 04:54:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I was away
And you had to go.
When I came back
I had no idea
That we'd missed each other...
Just by a week.
"There comes a time,"
They told me once,
"When it's time to go."
And I was alone.
I lived and grieved. Alone.
While I wandered,
I stopped at a place to rest.
Before I left, I saw a note
Written on the wall just outside
That said,
"The last half of a journey is leaving."
Then I knew
You had always been ready.
Copyright ©
TheSpiritx
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2007-05-30 16:54:11]
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Re: The Last Half of a Journey is Leaving
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by Dom on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 03:00:07 AM AEST
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I really liked this, its simple and to the point.
The title really drew me in, it is a lovely line.
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Re: The Last Half of a Journey is Leaving
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by brew on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 12:11:40 PM AEST
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Losing is hard.but we know deep down we must all go to another place when its time.why? I dont know.......that will be answered one day. I know I lost my mom 3 yrs ago..at young age, and i hated it....but i have lost now all granparents and mom in the past 4 yrs.......But i have to know they are better off. Just member the wonderful thoughts when your sad, it helps. Again , Im sorry!
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