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The First Half of a Journey is Arriving

Contributed by TheSpiritx on Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 04:33:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

We met one clear, sunny day
Slightly windy, if I remember

An auspicious wind, to be sure

And you, with your hair tangled,
Cute in your own way

Said things so normal and natural -
A pleasant conversation
But it was the look, the mind

Behind the voice,

Drawing, alluring
Like a perfume fit for a queen.
You wore your beauty
At your wrists, drawing me in

A pleasure, a brilliance, a relationship

But Destiny intervened, noticing
That things were far too good
She said she didn't approve
And it was to be her way

So, with a fading of interest,
Almost fleeting,

The romance,
Fleeing, saying

"The first half of a journey is arriving."

A shell of awkward
Who-knows-its and
What-to-dos

Like another baby bird
On the ground below its nest

Our relationship
Chirped for love

And, neglected,
Died.

Copyright © TheSpiritx ... [ 2007-05-30 16:33:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The First Half of a Journey is Arriving (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 02:00:02 AM AEST
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a very powerful penned out write.. full of emotions and truths to alot of loves.. great job here

vampyress Jenni

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