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DEAVON
Contributed by
MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 11:09:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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WHY DID YOU DIE
ONLY TO LEAVE ME WITH THESE TEARS
YOU WERE TO BE MY LOVE MY BABY MY EVERYTHING
WAKE UP DON'T GO AWAY
PLEASE I WANT YOU TO STAY
BORN OUT OF WEDLOCK
YOU WERE TO BE
THE LIFE OUTSIDE OF ME
BUT YOU LEFT BEFORE I EVER KNEW
WHAT YOU EVER WANTED TO DO
NOW I WONDER WHAT MIGHT HAVE BEEN
YOU WERE TO BE MY FIRST BORN CHILD
I SIT HERE WISHING I WAS MAking YOU SMILE
I LOVE YOU DEAVON
Copyright ©
MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
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2007-05-30 11:09:57]
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Re: DEAVON
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 11:18:02 AM AEST
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This is heart wrenching but beautifully written.
I'n so sorry for your loss.
Huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: DEAVON
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by brew on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 11:41:43 AM AEST
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A re-post? Hmmm, changed..what one cant get back, but can have with all the other part of life.
SIGHS
Brew~ |
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Re: DEAVON
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by Oceandreamer on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 10:41:54 PM AEST
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| Great poem.I can sense your intense hurt and sadness. So much you where still wanting to give to someone whom you dearly love …yet you’ve never had the chance to do so.A very sad write. ~~Oceandreamer~~ |
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Re: DEAVON
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 10:12:58 AM AEST
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my heart goes out to you my friend, this is such a beautiful loving tribute...
love n' hugs nessa |
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