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Sea Of Sorrow
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 08:42:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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God let me forget.
Every single sweet word spoken,
let me lose them in the rain,
may the wind and howling storm,
rush the memories away,
and toss them in to raging sea...
Then let the waves crash over me...
Drown me in this sea of sorrow,
'Cause I no longer wish to live,
to see the beauty of tomorrow,
or know the warmth love used to give,
then have it fade before my eyes,
And mourn it with heartbroken cries.
God let me forget
And sink below the violent swells,
to tear away the pain of feeling,
and awful thoughts on which I dwell,
oh God can you hear my screaming?
back out to the angry sea,
...Please let the storm crash over me.
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lostinmyself
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2007-05-29 08:42:58]
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Re: Sea Of Sorrow
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 09:01:21 AM AEST
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Oh wow hun!! I LOVE your addition to this ... so much pain and anguish.
I have been akin to this emotion, sweets, (more recently than
I'd like to admit), and to lose one's self in the sea ... never to feel ...
never to breathe ... never to hurt again! There is a certain sweet,
albeit sad, pleasure in that.
I am so happy to see a new write by you, (though I wish it
were a little happier). Still, I know that if you are pouring this
pain onto the page, it has less chance of engulfing your
heart and darkening your world. Beautifully written, hun.
You still got it!! :) There are but a few who can exact this kind
of emotion from me. You are one such poet! Your word choices,
line breaks and imagery, as always was exceptional!!
*hugs you tight*
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Re: Sea Of Sorrow
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 11:03:55 AM AEST
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You darn near made me cry . Why so sad? Your writes are so beautiful though I am feeling bad that you are hurting. What happened??
Michelle |
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Re: Sea Of Sorrow
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 01:02:09 PM AEST
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Phil...this was heart wrenching to read, but written so very elegantly. Right now, more than ever, I know exactly what you are feeling(well maybe not exactly but I can relate). (I feel we're swimming in the same damn sea). I have been so close to letting that storm crash over me. It does seem so easy sometimes to step out, to stop the hurt and the pain forever. I've managed to hang in there so far, and I hope you can too. I'm too damn nosy...... It's like I got to know what's going to happen tomorrow. Maybe I'm a sucker for pain. (who knows) I recently read where a soul that goes through many trials and tribulations, becomes a beautiful person. It makes us wiser and stronger. Great write, sis. *hugs you tight*
Peace and love,
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Re: Sea Of Sorrow
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 06:53:51 AM AEST
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YAy you wrote again.. this is simply heartfelt and deep.. so full of powerful emotion.. its like your heart is crying out.. beauitfully written
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Sea Of Sorrow
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 07:03:55 AM AEST
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Sis, I am so glad to see you have posted again.
Also, I see you have lost none of your talent!!
The emotional you washes through this piece so deeply, so completly. I am sorry for your pain. I would do what I could to ease it....but this....ahhhh this....wonderful!! |
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Re: Sea Of Sorrow
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by Dom on
Saturday, 9th June 2007 @ 02:30:37 AM AEST
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This is a heart-wrenching read, to see so much sorrow poured onto the page in such a beautiful manner.
I love the references to weather and nature.
Exquisitely written,
Dom |
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Re: Sea Of Sorrow
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th September 2007 @ 08:52:31 AM AEST
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This is sad and yet quite beautiful, in time all will be different but for the brilliance and the
intriguing way you have with the spoken word. lovely as always Phill, you are truly a
gifted artist in every scence of the word and
your love for it is ever present with every line that flow's from your pen . . .
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Re: Sea Of Sorrow
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 17th October 2007 @ 12:40:30 PM AEST
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Phil, I love the sea, and, in a sense, I feel like I own it. With that said, I approve of you using it! This was beautiful in it's sorrow. I love your choice of words, it really flows well.
Take care,
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Re: Sea Of Sorrow
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st October 2007 @ 12:40:30 PM AEST
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Sad? yes. Yet magnificent, cause it's you at
your best, with all of your artistry and skilled
craftsmanship, once again i walk away in
awe and contentment that i visited your page
seeking literary fullfilment. A mere click, and
i'm reading a peice of poetic perfecton as
only PMT know's how to pen . . .
Ben
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Re: Sea Of Sorrow
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by MemeCaroline on
Tuesday, 8th January 2008 @ 02:23:03 PM AEST
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Hi Phil,
Since we have been communicating back and forth today, I decided I would read some of your poetry. Wow! I am impressed! I am definitely going to read more. You are incredibly gifted. |
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