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Last Goodbye
Contributed by
DarkCloud
on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Last goodbye
fadeing fast
broken down
will this last
pills I take
swallow quick
in my soul
i feel sick
time I wait
ticking down
fall I take
to the ground
now I lie
unconcious floor
flooded mind
as was before
take me now
I wish away
fade the thoughts
of yesterday
all is still
my family pray
wish me back
from where now I stay
six feet down
my body lay
last goodbye
this note did say
Copyright ©
DarkCloud
... [
2003-02-27 22:20:00]
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Re: Last Goodbye
(User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 04:58:58 AM AEST
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| you have unerthed your feeling of suicide that was buried in your mind...and desired your family to pray for your return. is it the message you want to give. it serves no good. venkat |
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Re: Last Goodbye
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by notsoangelic3000 on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 12:58:03 PM AEST
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| Last goodbye, everyone has once in their life time has thought of killing themselves, I know I have, but um......I realize so many people would feel terrible if someone they loved passed away, though this is really none of my say, but, great poem~bad reality. |
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