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DEAVON
Contributed by
MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
on
Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 06:03:22 AM in AEST
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Grief
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WHY DID YOU DIE
ONLY TO LEAVE ME WITH THESE TEARS
YOU WERE TO BE MY LOVE MY BABY MY EVERYTHING
WAKE UP DON'T GO AWAY
PLEASE I WANT YOU TO STAY
BORN OUT OF WEDLOCK
YOU WERE TO BE
THE LIFE OUTSIDE OF ME
BUT YOU LEFT BEFORE I EVER KNEW
WHAT YOU EVER WANTED TO DO
NOW I WONDER WHAT MIGHT HAVE BEEN
YOU WERE TO BE MY FIRST BORN CHILD
I SIT HERE WISHING I WAS MAking YOU SMILE
I LOVE YOU DEAVON
Copyright ©
MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
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2007-05-29 06:03:22]
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Re: DEAVON
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by lottalivin on
Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 06:34:35 AM AEST
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some of what you say is very cliche
but that is overpowered by the deep feeling you out into it
your meaning comes across very well
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Re: DEAVON
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 08:14:42 AM AEST
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| I am sorry this happened. This is a very heartfelt write. God Bless. |
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Re: DEAVON
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by brew on
Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 09:09:47 AM AEST
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You never know why what is taken from one....It was given, but then gone. Sad , deep write, truly from the heart. ....But remember,...it was meant, and maybe one day you will see why. I really cant tell you anymore, than I already have.
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Re: DEAVON
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 11:21:15 AM AEST
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Im so sorry for this loss, loss in general is hard but when it is a child there is no sense or reason to it, heartbreaking write. You dont have Deavon sadly in this life but you will have the sweet child with you in the next.
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Michelle |
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