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Knocking At My Door
Contributed by
honey56
on
Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 04:01:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Why did you come knocking at my
Door,
After the changes, you put me through
Did you think I would repeat the same
Mistakes I so blindly walked in once
Before
And just walk back through that same
Old door..
Why did you come knocking at my door?
Thinking I would rekindle the fire once
Burned,
But I can smile and tell you this much
The flames has flicker and flicker out
Your words are just like the air, I do not
Hear them anymore..
Nor do I care about your words they
Mean nothing at all to me
Congratulations, congratulations you
Gotten wish..
Now you come running back here to
Me..
After you seen things were not as you
Figure..
But now it is to late!
You made your bed so just lay in it
Now you see the grass is not always
Greener on the other side..
But I certainly salute you and gladly
Say fair well..
For life is on track now without you
Being an evil demon..
Copyright ©
honey56
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2007-05-29 04:01:35]
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Re: Knocking At My Door
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 08:45:46 AM AEST
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Honey, for a fictional piece, this felt exceptionally real.
wonderful portrayal of a love that turned its back, only to realize
later what was missing .. .I only wish that we could all have the
strength you have exercised here, in being able to slam the
door shut; never turning back. Excellent write, my friend.
~Breezy |
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Re: Knocking At My Door
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 01:04:20 AM AEST
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A sad but what seems to be a quite liberating peice of writting. A carthasus of the heart and soul. And though it may be fiction it also is real in that this occurance is to often apart
of love in this day and age. lovely presentaion none the less.
Ben |
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Re: Knocking At My Door
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 07:00:29 AM AEST
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wow this is like a real story even though its fictional.. so powerful and full of emotion. great job
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Knocking At My Door
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 10:46:35 AM AEST
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| good write, shows strength we don`t always have in the real" it is powerful and centered..Vincent |
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