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Hit
Contributed by
israpon
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Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 09:03:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Contemplating where my life is going,
Take a hit to keep my thoughts flowing.
Inhale, exhale. The smoke seems to soothe me.
Giving me the feeling of somewhat being free.
Staring blankly at this dark sky,
Inhale, exhale. I Let my brain sizzle and fry.
Tracing my fingers across the picture's frame,
Body and mind, I'm too numb to feel pain.
Inhale, exhale. My chest heaves up and down.
Completely oblivious to everything in this small town.
Hit after hit my senses nulling,
Hit after hit I'll never stop falling.
Denying any sign of my own reality
Not wanting to face my current calamity.
as much as I want to keep stalling,
I know that nothing can stay falling.
Copyright ©
israpon
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2007-05-28 21:03:23]
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Re: Hit
(User Rating: 1 )
by Holly573 on
Wednesday, 26th May 2010 @ 07:02:22 AM AEST
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| i like the meaning behind this poem which i think i understand, s'goood. |
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Re: Hit
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by Applethoughtrotten on
Tuesday, 27th July 2010 @ 11:53:58 AM AEST
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| Wow....I know what you mean....Thanks...Apple |
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