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My Desimation
Contributed by
blood-stained_sakura2
on
Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 03:16:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I walk through life
With a noose around my neck
It's became such a strife
And a living wreck
St. Anger caresses my shoulder
Can this life get any colder?
My regrets have seeped through
I'm quietly evaporating
What essence do I emit?
This tainted heart is saturated
Poseidon's mighty torrent
Cascades me with the waters
That fill my breathless lungs
Invigoration is mere bliss
But I cannot cherish it
Life is but a mere illusion
Steeped with lies and confusion
I struggle with this life
But also to prevent this knife
I can't contain this internal confliction
I'm falling through an inner dimension
I recite a final verse
To release this binding curse
And through this final desimation
I spill my blood in dedication
A tear trickles down in sorrow
There will never be a tomorrow
I plunge the sword all the way through
And my vision weakens
I see the light, my beacon
I die with honor
My suicide
I die with honor like a samurai
So the angels comfort my fading body
And I go gently into that good night
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Re: My Desimation
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by shelby on
Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 03:34:21 AM AEST
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A pwerful write touched with life and its problems. It flowed nice. I hope things improve for you .
~Michelle~ |
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Re: My Desimation
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 08:16:07 AM AEST
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I really liked your write...
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Re: My Desimation
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 03:41:40 AM AEST
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Well expressed and I do have to say that I can relate to this and your feelings. You did a really great job writing your feelings out and it was really well expressed. Well done.
Take care
Christina |
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