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Checkerboard Sky
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
on
Sunday, 27th May 2007 @ 05:56:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Under a checkerboard sky
Tonight, I see life in a new light
Slow it down, Take it in
Breathe in the life that's yours
Perfect moments as perfect can be
Anything more is a step from reality
As close to peace as peace could be
Too far to reach
But pierces the soul
Fix your eyes to the sky
Watch it shine on the world below
Illuminate what life could be
Moonlight peaking through
Shines down on the best of us
The rest of us sleep the night away
Unlike those who wait for these moments
Who stay awake and fight the pain
With ease of heart
The faint can say
We live like this every day
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the_story_of_the_year
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2007-05-27 17:56:44]
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Re: Checkerboard Sky
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by shelby on
Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 02:27:10 AM AEST
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I adored the peaceful nature of this write. I find that taking in all the beauty around us is the best healer.You captured that perfectly in this write. Detail and images, flow and style delightful
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Re: Checkerboard Sky
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 08:30:45 AM AEST
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Well what can I say..Just the perfect write...
Love the piecefullness I felt reading this..
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Re: Checkerboard Sky
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by Alex23 on
Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 05:41:14 PM AEST
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wow, this was a good one.
I've noticed that a few of yours automatically create an image in my head. awesome. |
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