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Live
Contributed by
crow
on
Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 03:16:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I would come take your hand
lead you gentle
cool waters edge.
We would lay silent
listening to song
forest waves longing..
to chasing clouds.
The World could go by
till We gave it breath..
chase away sorrow
speak of love.
We can`t pull Stars
from the evening sky
but wonder at all
pick one for Us.
We are in love
at every moment..
from sadness
to the Moon that will rise..
and We will be
and We will live....Vincent
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crow
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2007-05-26 15:16:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Live
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 03:23:12 PM AEST (User
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Breathtaking. What a beautiful write. *hugs you tight* I love your writes, my friend.
Much peace,
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Re: Live
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 27th May 2007 @ 12:55:16 AM AEST (User
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this is sooo beautiful and the picture is lovely, what a sense of peace this gives...
love n' hugs nessa
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Re: Live
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Sunday, 27th May 2007 @ 03:19:26 AM AEST (User
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and we will be and move on...
Im reading this as my Dove is outside cooing .... such a peaceful write... one of many reasons why I love you... picks a couple stars for us so we can shake some stardust (smiles)
hugsssss
Michelle |
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Re: Live
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th May 2007 @ 11:57:10 PM AEST (User
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Oh, my my MY!!!! How enchanting!
Vincent, this is such a glorious testament to romance and the
simple pleasure of seeking it and all that surronds it. Good
GRACIOUS!! Each line, every single word, has a softness to it
that cradles the heart. There is no escaping the beauty in this.
Wonderful work, my friend. Just stunning!
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Re: Live
(User Rating: 1 ) by MisfitMe on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 09:43:44 AM AEST (User
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I've known what it is to have this...
"The World could go by
till We gave it breath.."~you
...a wondrous thing, as is this write!
BigLoveMuchPeace
~misfitme |
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