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Painting a Portrait
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
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Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'm painting a portrait of me
for all of you to see
just how beutifull
death can be
I paint a picture oh so clear
that all of my screams you can hear
just how awfull
life can be
I paint with colors so nice
of my self sacrifice
to show how wonderfull
death can be
I paint with precision
of my wrists incision
to show how controllable
life can be
A portrait I've painted
but now it is tainted
and nothing is changeable
for me
Copyright ©
SuicidalSon
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2003-02-27 20:40:00]
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Re: Painting a Portrait
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by WildFire on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 08:59:42 PM AEST
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| thats is a very good poem and a serious one too. i hope tho u dont really think of killing urself tho. |
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Re: Painting a Portrait
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by Lia on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 09:41:54 PM AEST
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| Life is beautiful..live it :) |
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Re: Painting a Portrait
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by Jade on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 09:44:04 PM AEST
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| THIS IS A DEEP POEM. I HAVE WRITTEN MANY ABOUT SUICIDE MYSELF. I ALWAYS WRITE THAT WAY TO VENT ABOUT THOSE EMOTIONS. I HOPE YOU FEEL THE SAME. |
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Re: Painting a Portrait
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by SuicidalSon on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 01:02:03 PM AEST
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I don't really think that way,its just something
I enjoy writing about. It takes a lot of deep thought to come up with these things.I appreciate all compliments, Thank you.
JF |
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Re: Painting a Portrait
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by yellow_sundragon on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 06:54:00 PM AEST
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This portrait that you paint,
Will forever hold a taint,
That comes from all the pain involved,
For you never will have solved
The problems left in life,
Because the solution is not a knife.
good write though....
YS |
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Re: Painting a Portrait
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 15th May 2015 @ 02:31:59 PM AEST
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Nice portrait! I'm glad you're still painting....
Jenni |
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