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Little Steps!
Contributed by
jackson21
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Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 11:48:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Try to take little steps,
try to move on,
seems like my feet are cement,
when all my hope is gone.
Your smile always makes me pause,
breath ridgid, heart exposed,
my love for you defies all laws,
you make me crumble like all of those.
Seems like you have no idea,
of those who yearn for you,
of every girl whose shed a tear,
broken hearted and left a blue.
But fear holds you back my friend,
fear to love and be loved,
can't seem to see the bitter end,
alone as always but everyones angel from above!
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2007-05-26 11:48:46] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Little Steps!
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 12:17:08 PM AEST (User
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A touching write,wonderful expression.
Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the comment as well.
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