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Untitled
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untitled
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Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 05:20:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I know that I'm alone now...
for a long time, I thought I already knew...
but that uncomfortable ball of pain
still rolled around in my stomach...
trembling for hope...
desperate.
But you weren't here tonight...
The only thing I thought I had.
And they just disappeared,
uninterested with only me.
And I was all alone, because you just couldnt come.
I thought I was my own person,
with friends that wanted me for me...
But thats not true, I see that now.
Because they werent interested in me.
They ignored whatever I said.
Just looked for something more...
Then they left.
they left!
They left because you couldnt come.
I'm not mad at you, I know this wasn't planned.
But I thought I'd be enough
They'd love me for me.
But apparently that not true,
because you weren't here tonight.
They didn't leave when they saw me,
they left when they didn't see you.
So, I guess that shows they don't hate me.
They can tolerate me.
But only with when your here.
I thought I had something,
friends who loved me for me...
But thats not true,
I wish it was but it's not...
So now that round rock of pain,
just some how deflated,
I feel empty inside.
You may hold me,
you may comfort me,
but you might as easily turn me away...
so I'll just stand here crying,
because you couldn't show up...
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2007-05-26 05:20:47]
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Re: Untitled
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by catz77 on
Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 07:02:59 AM AEST
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this poem is very emotional
and i believe you did a good job
on showing us how you feel
i've been through that before...
but just keep smiling
:D
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Re: Untitled
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 12:05:49 PM AEST
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touching write, it happens to all of us. Screw em you dont need that, as you get older you will learn that lesson and be all the happier for it. Keep writing and the true friends will
appear.
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Re: Untitled
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by Puppy on
Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 05:49:56 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem, full of so much emotion. great write
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