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IN SEARCH THERE OF
Contributed by
freda_burrel
on
Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 02:23:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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have you ever felt like you were lost?
you'd try to find yourself at all cost.
the feeling you get when you feel alone,
would you search? if you were prone?
the feeling of loss you get within
you dont know how to start,or where to begin.
please come find me at all cost,
for i need help, for i am lost.
if you were lost what would you do?
i trust that you would find me too.
but come what may, just look above
dont forget to look under,
in search there of
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freda_burrel
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2007-05-25 14:23:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: IN SEARCH THERE OF
(User Rating: 1 ) by joelmuses on
Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 02:27:33 PM AEST (User
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I like the ending's flow.
Good scheme too :) |
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