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young Men:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 05:28:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If more of us young men would pray
useing our brain is a better way.
Some of us would hear our children say
"my dad made the right decision by
just walking away".
Now it is my time and i just want to say
thank-you God for letting me live to see
another day.
Living in poverty is no help i say,
so i just want to stay alive to have a chance
to achieve my goal i pray.
if i die that's no way to go
i don't want to go out that way.
Achieving nothing,helping no one,owneing nothing
life is more than that i say.
so i pray that all young men would hear me today.
brain over matters is the best way.
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Re: young Men:
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by Honey56 on
Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 05:45:08 AM AEST
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That is a prayer women and men should say..
Good Work! |
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Re: young Men:
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by Lele on
Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 09:59:08 AM AEST
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| I like your poem. It´s seems like one of my favorite poet (Drummond) who said: Vamos de mãos dadas (we all, let's go with our all hands together). |
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