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♥black hearted

Contributed by ladyfawn on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 11:43:29 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems




  • look not back to what you once knew
    go forth with your life; forget the blue
    be grateful for what you have; they say
    i wave these unconscious people away,

    live in beauty, by mist and sun and rain
    aye, im to be happy in this temporal vein
    worlds birds sing sweetly; noise abounds
    whilst death arrives among all that sound,

    anguish is fathomless, ever unending, pure
    again! again! tis far too many tears i endure
    still on the blooming side of the stone wall
    for i am made of shade and void; with petals,

    the mutitude of time is yet heaped upon me
    for truelove wanted his ashes set out to sea
    though know not what keeps me, nor wonder
    yet not the strength to leave him go asunder,

    alas, twas not enough, for gods enjoy laughter
    they are all gossipie mysticals in the hereafter
    death claimed my dog, sweet dear best friend
    aye, came once again, to my horse put an end,

    weary i am.

    §* *§
    *|*














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    authors note:
    then:
    beginning of the black, crept in when i kissed his cold sweet lips,
    new death brings me back years ago when i held his lifeless fingertips,
    and read a letter to him of when we walked barefooted in the snow, and
    so many other moments, only we lovers could know, for to me i was
    reading to him and we were alone, in reality 400 others were there at
    the funeral; how deep was our love.
    now:
    for approx. one month crows followed me everywhere, people noticed,
    at first i interrpreted them as something beautiful: i was wrong. so now
    once more i loose again those dear to me, an english mastiff dog; with
    heart of gold named prissy who went everywhere with me all the time,
    she died in my arms and thats why i was gone two weeks, overwhelmed,
    lost, unbalanced. then 4days ago, friend sunshine the saddlehorse,who
    only last week played tag with the chiwawa, it took a backhoe to bury her,
    actually, im still quite unbalanced....sigh...

    seems the crows are gone.


    i hope.









    Copyright © ladyfawn ... [ 2007-05-24 23:43:29]
    (Date/Time posted on site)





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    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by Angelic_Demon on Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 01:07:14 AM AEST
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    Aww... it's beautiful... and it so stinks that Prissy and Sunny died... it finally hit me the other day and I balled my eyes out. *huggles to you, Mom*


    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by Honey56 on Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 03:52:31 AM AEST
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    Very nice write and do hope you get to feeling better soon..


    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by shelby on Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 03:54:43 AM AEST
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    Nessa,
    I have tears streaming down my cheeks. I am so every sorry. I know that your love for them runs deep as the ocean hun. I wish that I could ease this heart that is aching so deepling ((Nessa))

    The poem is so moving and beautiful though so sad.

    I will say one thing about the Crows, alot of the time movies etc make them out to be dark or bad, not so. They are a messenger, I have had many experiences specially over last two years with a Crow. THen my parents had one as well, I will tell you a story or two in private.

    I hope you have some comfort to ease this pain my dear sweet Nessa, I understand the feeling of loss and mourning all to well so I do know how you are feeling.

    huge hugs

    Michelle


    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by deadheadpoet on Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 04:15:59 AM AEST
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    Sweet Nessa, Tears are in my eyes. I love your write, your tender heart and your most kindest of souls. The death of friends/family whether they be human or other is never an easy journey. They pass on to a more peaceful place and we stay carrying the burden of remembrance. I was once told by a very wise man, that our loved ones would not want to see us hurt so badly, I believe that's true. I'm hugging you tight from afar, my sweet sister.
    Much peace and love to you and your fur family who has made that journey.
    Laura


    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by brew on Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 11:09:42 AM AEST
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    So sorry for the loss...it hurts, and will continue to, yet be glad you had time with them. Beautiful write for them and feelings poured out. Again sooooooo sorry!


    Brew~


    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by emystar on Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 12:54:26 PM AEST
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    Nessa,
    Girl you are one tuff person!
    I'm so sorry for all your looses in life.
    Hang tuff, my long time friend as joy cometh in the morning.
    Big luv, mucho huggs, prayer,
    emy


    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by Crow on Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 01:09:55 PM AEST
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    Nessa, what a sad thing to hear, I`ll send every good thought for a healing breath to you.
    Please take care...Vincent


    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by Vampirequeen on Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 03:17:02 PM AEST
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    Awww Nessa if i would of known about that.
    I am so sorry about your lost and pain.
    You are a wonderful lady don't ever forget it.
    love an hugs


    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by myheartsvoice on Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 03:34:28 AM AEST
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    A beautifuly written poem only in a minor key of life. a sad song sung in a monatone voice
    yet heard through out the land for it's realy a beautiful voice that's going through some very
    dicordinant progressions. a gentle healing to
    you my friend . . .

    ((((Nessa))))

    Ben


    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by needledancing on Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 12:17:49 PM AEST
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    Alas my friend our loses drive us to write the most beautiful pieces. Built on rememberance and engraving the signifigance of loving forever in our hearts. A heartfelt write of sadness and great beauty.


    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by Former_Member on Sunday, 27th May 2007 @ 06:57:28 AM AEST
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    A quite beautiful and powerful work of art here. Flows brilliantly and breaks cliches with a seemingly effortless work of art. You have done well here my friend. Keep up the good work. I am deeply sorry for the situation, but as always good poets can move so much easier when they write about such things. My sincere sympathies.

    BRAVO!

    SCM


    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by Former_Member on Monday, 28th May 2007 @ 02:53:36 AM AEST
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    Nessa, my sweet friend, when you spoke briefly of death in a PM,
    I didn't know such sorrow had befallen you. Please know my heart
    goes out to you during your sadness and I pray for your release ...

    You have done well to exact the emotion and pain of your
    circumstance with enormous poetic flair. Your author's note
    trips the heart, dear friend. I am hoping all your anguish
    is soon replaced with a fullness of love and happiness overflowing.

    *hugs you tight*

    @--------->-----

    ~Breezy


    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by Butterat_Zool on Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 05:38:34 AM AEST
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    A beautiful memoriam and a Shakespearean example of how written record outlasts the mortal form. So sorry for your loss. Any lesser poet would have butchered this fine tribute with sentiment, pity, and woe, but i can see you mourn in the images, and need no reminder that mourning brings tears. Masterful. Priceless.

    BZ.


    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by Dom on Saturday, 9th June 2007 @ 02:51:33 AM AEST
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    The poem itself made my eyes well up, and then reading the note made the tears spill out.
    So much sadness in a short space of time, my heart goes out to you, such losses are never easy.

    Take care,
    Dom


    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by Oceandreamer on Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 08:28:28 AM AEST
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    Awesome write. Beautiful words, rich with emotion and powerful .Thanks for sharing... ~~Oceandreamer~~


    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by sally-heart-jack on Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 11:59:49 AM AEST
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    I couldn't figure out if this was a dark write or like an 'inspirational' one, so it kept me reading. good job!

    'anguish is fathomless, ever unending, pure
    again! again! tis far too many tears i endure

    the mutitude of time is yet heaped upon me

    death claimed my dog, sweet dear best friend
    aye, came once again, to my horse put an end,

    weary i am.'

    these , were perfectly written, adn easily my favorite parts :]

    I enjoy much of your work !

    Love, Julia :]


    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by eastboyez on Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 11:46:46 AM AEST
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    beautiful


    Re: ♥black hearted (User Rating: 1 )
    by colinb on Monday, 3rd March 2014 @ 12:41:11 AM AEST
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    Beautifully written memories you will always hold in your heart




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