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In ones Power.............so ............
Contributed by
brew
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Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 12:43:27 PM in AEST
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Take me
Bring me forth to ones heart
Dont hurt me
Dont make me deport
When i cry make me smile
When I smile
Make me smile more
Make me whole
Keep me to want
Keep me take
Keep me to.........take all
Its a wandering dream
It wont happen....unless I want it too
I do
But
How
Damn its hard
Its pleasure makes me think
deep think
take all
and say
HOW
I want you
All heart and soul
More than one could
So
There...
You have it
Go
It will happen
Copyright ©
brew
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2007-05-24 12:43:27]
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Re: In ones Power.............so ............
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 01:01:02 PM AEST
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I AM AT A LOSS FOR WORDS AGAIN HUN
YOU ARE THE ONLY ONE THAT CAN LEAVE ME SPEECHLESS AND WANTING MORE
I CAN'T WAIT TILL WE WRITE TOGETHER AGAIN ,,,,,,,,,,I MISS THAT SO MUCH
LUV YOU BABE
SCOTT
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Re: In ones Power.............so ............
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 03:23:08 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this. It felt quick and jagged, and really came out so cool at the end. I think your words give some good advice.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: In ones Power.............so ............
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 09:39:51 PM AEST
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Wow Dayna! These everwither thoughts flow from you with
determination and purpose. Even though there may be
uncertainties, your conviction to press on, as they say,
is remarkable.
I LOVE the last stanza. It's like saying, do not be afraid ... what
you seek you shall find; what you desire is yours for the taking;
what you want is what you shall have. It's perfect, hun.
*loves this*
hmmmmmmmm..... possibilities ~
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: In ones Power.............so ............
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by madhusudan on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 10:01:53 PM AEST
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| Excellent read...It's just different, refreshing and nice...keep on the good work! |
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Re: In ones Power.............so ............
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by Honey56 on
Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 03:58:08 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful romance write..I love it..
Great indeed! |
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Re: In ones Power.............so ............
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by Crow on
Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 12:59:12 PM AEST
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| Hi Brew, I like the way this write comes in pieces" Vincent |
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Re: In ones Power.............so ............
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by myheartsvoice on
Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 03:51:35 AM AEST
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Lovely peice of in depth poetry. we want we need we sometimes get and sometimes don't. But seldom do we just lend ourselves
to it and more often than not find we should have . . . Beautiful work as always dana . . .
((((Dana))))
Ben |
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Re: In ones Power.............so ............
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by brew on
Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 07:10:30 AM AEST
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Thanks to all who has commented on this and my others.All of you are great poets with such kind hearts, which I cherish with all I have. And Miss Roxie, I will message you soon. K? And thank you for sharing your things going on with you and all, I thank you.
Brew~ |
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Re: In ones Power.............so ............
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by Dimes on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 09:51:28 AM AEST
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| Interesting poem. I like the style- original, fresh. |
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Re: In ones Power.............so ............
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 04:55:33 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write. Speaks much wisdom of our pursuit for love or lovers.We never think much of anything but the initial wanting.Enjoyed. |
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