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pretending things are bad

Contributed by Phantomvampyress on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 09:26:22 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Cry; open your soul to whoever may pass
lie through your teeth
tell them your trapped
feed them all your lines of your demented crap

fake tears will flow
as they never know
behind the mask you portray
this isn't the first time
but it will not be the last

your not the victim
your not the weak
its just attention and pity you seek

Vampyress Jenni




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Re: pretending things are bad (User Rating: 1 )
by glassicallyunsuperficial on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 10:38:39 AM AEST
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I know what you mean, many times these people are just so insecured and unable to express it correctly.So they lie in an attempt to obtain the attention that they want. Your poem accurately potrays the truth!

cheers,
-glass


Re: pretending things are bad (User Rating: 1 )
by aloneinthememory on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 11:43:28 AM AEST
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Ooh very good. I love this. I know exactly where this comes from. Theres a girl who I know that is exactly like this, I hate it, people need to stop throwing pity parties like that so often.

Fox


Re: pretending things are bad (User Rating: 1 )
by Chamaron on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 01:52:05 PM AEST
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I know exactly how it is. What's even worse than a pity party for one is when you get a few of these "oh poor me" people together... every life experience turns into a near-death occurence. Why can't they just be glad that they aren't the people they pretend to be?


Re: pretending things are bad (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 02:51:35 PM AEST
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and incredible wise u r.
huggs,
emy


Re: pretending things are bad (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 04:24:07 PM AEST
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ooo! and you know what else? they always ask for money! arg! i had to quit being friends with one woman i loved like a sister for this very reason, always a crisis, some catastrophy, some world shattering crap! {turns out she thought of me and my years of friendship far less than i valued hers-big huge surprize aye?} omg, the sky was falling on her! {not} grrrrrr!! and futhermore, she never ever asked how i was... unless it was a butter-me-up deal... hey! could ya tell? --->i loved this poem it was right on! lol

love n' hugs nessa


Re: pretending things are bad (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 11:39:37 PM AEST
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Great poem.. I like how you wrote this and what you are expressing through your words.. I can agree with you on this one.. Great poem..

Take care
Christina


Re: pretending things are bad (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 03:49:16 AM AEST
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OOOooo This is a write with some teeth. I loved it Jen. I have met someone like this (well more than one person, but this "one" just happens to stick out in my memory) It is a sad thing when you lie and try to capture someone else's emotions just because of an attention seeking device. It is despicable to the person they do this too. It is even more tragic they do it to themselves...what a sorry existence.
Good write as always.
Peace and hugs,
Laura


Re: pretending things are bad (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 04:05:26 AM AEST
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Very,very poem..And a true write..


Re: pretending things are bad (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 11:25:53 AM AEST
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Most just do it for attnetion....because, they have NO friends.! They hide to find ppl and then they actually cant. Sometimes its sad.but its wrong. Great write towards ones who know they are wrong.


Brew~


Re: pretending things are bad (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 03:21:21 PM AEST
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Lmao @ Nessa.
Truly though you are so right about some people.I know quite a few people that do that.


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by shelby on Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 02:23:58 AM AEST
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strong write and IU must agree with it.

Michelle


Re: pretending things are bad (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 04:05:36 AM AEST
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A poetic version of tough love. nicely done Jenn.


Re: pretending things are bad (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 04:06:40 AM AEST
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Re: pretending things are bad (User Rating: 1)
by myheartsvoice on Saturday, May 26 2007 @ 04:05:36 AEST
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A poetic version of tough love. nicely done Jenn


Ben


Re: pretending things are bad (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 11:26:05 AM AEST
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*applauds*

hear! hear!

Wow Jenni! This was exceptional! Very powerful in thought
and dead on, in my opinion. It's sad (very sad indeed) that there
exists those that would prey on the good nature and gentle
hearts of the compassionate, all in an attempt just to be
"noticed". I hate emotional blackmailers !!

Bravo poet!! A job VERY well done!

~Breezy


Re: pretending things are bad (User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 10:25:12 PM AEST
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Great work Jenni.You have talent ... a great way with words!Thanks for sharing.Keep writing. ~~Oceandreamer~~


Re: pretending things are bad (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 04:24:04 AM AEST
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I think some of these people pretend to be in hardship just to belong. Perhaps they feel quilty having life so easy compared to some of their friends.It is sad however to be on the recieving end. I once had a lawyer moaning to me because he had to pay $40,000 in taxes. I told him to stop whining that was more than I had made that year.A great piece here my friend you got us all thinking and agreeing!!!




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