|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
If Tonight Was My Last Night
Contributed by
justagirl82
on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 04:46:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
|
If I decided tonight was the night
All the pain would leave,
No more tears would fall from my eyes
And
It was the night my last breath would be taken,
Would you feel bad
For everything you did to me?
For every sarcastic remark you made?
For never caring enough?
If tonight was that night,
And Tuesday was my funeral
Would you come and cry for me?
‘Cause as I sit here typing this out,
tears blurring my vision,
I can’t help but think
You would only come because you’re my sister
And mom and dad forced you.
You were never there for me
Even when I was there for you.
I hope you find this,
So you know how much you really hurt me.
And the pitiful thing is,
I couldn’t even try and tell you the truth
Because you’d be laughing too hard.
So when everyone tells me we’re sisters and sisters argue all the time
I want you to know that your sarcasm cut through me more than any blade ever did
And if that’s what sisters are supposed to do,
I figure I might as well make you an only child.
Copyright ©
justagirl82
... [
2007-05-24 04:46:05]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: If Tonight Was My Last Night
(User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 09:28:53 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
a very powerful raw emotion packed poem.. well expressed.. sometimes people are just selfish and there is nothing you can do or say to change that.. but they are the ones who miss out on the greatness of having a wonderful friend in a sibling not you and they have to live with the guilt. they may not realize now but someday it will will hit them.. very well expressed
vampyress Jenni |
|
|
Re: If Tonight Was My Last Night
(User Rating: 1 )
by Chamaron on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 01:40:46 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Those to whom we are connected so deeply will either wake up one day to see that they have hurt us or simply won't ever wake up. Though they may express that they do not care for you, I'm more than sure others do. Just because one person makes it hard to rise and stand from a fall doesn't make it all in vain. May you find what makes the struggle worth it and the glimmer of light to get you through the darkness of the night. Most importantly, keep on writing. |
|
|
Re: If Tonight Was My Last Night
(User Rating: 1 )
by 20deep on
Tuesday, 29th May 2007 @ 10:42:38 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| wow...i hope you calmed down since...powerful stuff...really heavy hearted...i HAD to click on this poem once I saw the title...great work...just dont forget about your fans...umm...seeya |
|
|
Re: If Tonight Was My Last Night
(User Rating: 1 )
by fayeelizibeth on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 09:33:10 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i know the feelings that you express very intamately. i am the oldest of three, and many times my sisters are mean and careless to me. there are just some people in life who like to get you down, usually to bring themselves back up. in the way of advice, the best i can give you is to know that it will not last forever, people mellow with age and many see the error of thier ways. and even if your sis is one of those people who just like to hurt people (i have one like that) just know that it's not truely about you, it's about them and thier own problems that they feel the need to hurt others. |
|
|
Re: If Tonight Was My Last Night
(User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on
Thursday, 14th January 2010 @ 05:05:21 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Truly heartwrenching.....
I can't begin to imagine what caused such sibling troubles x
Star x x x |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
