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The writer who tried to write a love story but ended up with a hat
Contributed by
Harmony
on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 04:11:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Rotten people lodged in foreheads belived the writer,
itching at his own
a lady sat and watched him,
and stretched her rotten crone
He trys to write a story
about two loves holding hands
to care and be as one
and travel imagined lands
Rotten people spread disease and clear thought pushed hers back
it saved him from a certain failure
He made the paper into a hat
and left
Copyright ©
Harmony
... [
2007-05-24 04:11:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The writer who tried to write a love story but ended up with a hat
(User Rating: 1 ) by law_glen18 on
Tuesday, 1st January 2008 @ 12:33:21 PM AEST (User
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Ya know,
This poem really left me thinking. I can see a certain air of intelligence behind the words of this authors poem.
A truly thought provoking and out of the ordinary write. Awesome work Harmony!!! |
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