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The Joys To Our Ears
Contributed by
slay797
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Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 05:41:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Music has been born today
Our joy to ears
Copyright ©
slay797
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2007-05-23 17:41:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Joys To Our Ears
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 04:50:10 AM AEST (User
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being that haiku is 5-7-5 your last line would have been better written as a joy to our ears or: our joy for the ears ...or why not your title as the last line as that is 5 as well, aside from that i love it and the meaning,
love n' hugs nessa |
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