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Tarnished By A Liar
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 04:41:28 PM in AEST
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Do you not see
this changes everything?
Every frigging thing that..
that I thought I'd learned;
thought I gained from you...
has shattered into
billions
of minute pieces.
I'm afraid too many to ever repair
or reshape.
In a matter of seconds
a list is found
the soul of glass is imploded.
Lies start
followed by more
fueled by your fear
of losing me.
YOU said you were different
(so did the last one)
Now it would seem
my whole existence is in ruins.
The temple that you stood upon
now in so much rubble
about my bloodied feet.
I gave everything I had to you
(and then some)
Every piece of me was attached to you.
I thought we were connected equally
in this universe...
we spin in together.
You say "I love you".
How can you dare
speak it from lips which lie?
You turn to someone else
now I live in tortured hell.
Tears rush as I cry.
You cannot tell me
what you're thinking
you cannot tell me
what you feel
I can't move on
without some answers.
You dealt me a dirty damn deal.
This illusion of love
now faded like smoke
from a once burning fire. My
heart lies here broken
forever to be alone
Tarnished by a liar.
March 24 2007
Laura Horner
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Re: Tarnished By A Liar
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by slay797 on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 05:46:18 PM AEST
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| darn good emotion in this one. i can totally relate and really like it |
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Re: Tarnished By A Liar
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 04:41:59 AM AEST
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humans can be such horrid things, ...excellent well done expression of feelings, if not for your note i would have been worried about you, betrayal is such a nasty affair,
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Tarnished By A Liar
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 07:53:28 AM AEST
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wow laurabean such an emotional and passionate write.. so powerful.. beautiful job here
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Tarnished By A Liar
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 09:27:01 AM AEST
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I had to keep my self from breaking down into tears reading this my sister laure. i can only summize a guess of what your feeling and yet i feel it. i'm speechless, this is more than a poem it is breakdown put to words. Oh i am so so sorry your going throught this. may time heal you in a gentle way and bring you back around again as you once were.
((((((((((((peace my Hippie Sister))))))))))
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Re: Tarnished By A Liar
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by Neo-Theatre on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 11:37:39 AM AEST
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Yes, white hot.
The Neo-theatres feel compelled to say little.
There is enough said.
There is no answer to the sublime.
Keep well.
TNT. |
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Re: Tarnished By A Liar
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 11:50:49 PM AEST
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Whoa! You tell em! This was really good writting and damn well expressed.. I liked this poem.. I can relate to this a little.. Great job..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Tarnished By A Liar
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by shelby on
Friday, 25th May 2007 @ 04:02:22 AM AEST
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Hugs her sis,
Laura Im overcome with the feelings I get while reading this. So much pain and written with the touch of a talented hand with the heart and soul of beauty... That dear Laura is you.... beauty inside and out and dont you ever forget that. I love ya!
~Michelle~ |
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