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Held In Loving Arms
Contributed by
needledancing
on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 02:50:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Hold my hand and tell me that we are okay.
Speak of the natural things that people say.
For if darkness comes to soon,
at the falling of the moon.
Then my restless heart must fly from earth today.
Share earth delights of skys and trees.
Waterways and mountains, whispy breeze.
Leave emotions misted on the earth.
Your have roots of gold, now show your worth.
Let my restless heart fly with the earth.
If every moonlight night reflects the sky,
Show the stars, the soul of you and I.
Take the milky way and fly my path.
Let this be my epitaph.
Then let my restless heart be of this earth.
Copyright ©
needledancing
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2007-05-23 14:50:33]
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Re: Held In Loving Arms
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 04:01:28 PM AEST
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THe pic carried me away with your words of such soft and soothing moments. Beautiful.
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Re: Held In Loving Arms
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 04:46:42 PM AEST
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I could get lost in that picture and the write as well. Beautiful piece of poetry. (the pic reminds me of artwork I've seen on Leaning Tree cards...they're fabulous) Thank you so much for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Held In Loving Arms
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by slay797 on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 05:51:05 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem, very magestic |
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Re: Held In Loving Arms
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 10:24:50 PM AEST
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Very imaginative and beautiful, the picture blended well with your wonderful poem.
FRANCO. |
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Re: Held In Loving Arms
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 04:29:58 AM AEST
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aside from the obvious beauty of both poem and picture, the deeper underlying expression is what i love, the acceptance of your place in life and acceptance of possible demise, put so softly, with preference of life:)
love n' hugs nessa
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Re: Held In Loving Arms
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 07:32:23 AM AEST
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| This is a really good poem and a really beautiful picture. I guess that it makes sense that we choose of paths in one way or another. Absolutely Brilliant! |
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Re: Held In Loving Arms
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 09:11:50 AM AEST
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This is stunning. I mean it takes my breath away. You are fast approaching a region i call discovery in your self, i wonder if you know it? i certainly do. . .
((((ND))))
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Re: Held In Loving Arms
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 09:39:03 AM AEST
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wow this is so nicely written. its like taking a journey.. sounds like it could be a fairy tale.. great job here .. such lovely wording and nice pic to go with it.. great job
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Held In Loving Arms
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by brew on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 12:54:53 PM AEST
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The WHOLE took me way and beyond too all........ Beautiful
Great post
Brew~ |
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