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Her Eyes
Contributed by
Aspiring
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Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 02:12:04 PM in AEST
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Her eyes blue lakes,
Of liquid time,
A second becomes a year,
A glance, a moment,
All it takes,
Life is drawing near.
The green of spring,
In one quick turn,
The hazel of sadness shows,
Here, the difference
A second makes,
They freeze so cold they burn,
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Re: Her Eyes
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 03:29:44 PM AEST
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I loved this and the realness to it the style and words, claps hand and says bravo!
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Re: Her Eyes
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 04:50:22 PM AEST
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I'm with Michelle on this one. Bravo. Very well done. It was short and crisp...very much so, to the point. I love how you described the eye changes as with seasons and time. A pleasure to read your words. Your ending line...fabulous: "They freeze so cold they burn"
Peace, Laura |
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