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~:*ballard of poets*:~
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 09:56:12 AM in AEST
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many a poet
has been struck straight through the heart,
piled dead unseen.
§* *§
*|*
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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2007-05-23 09:56:12]
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Re: ~:*ballard of poets*:~
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 12:45:51 PM AEST
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wow this is a powerful little line packed with a punch.. it should go on one of those saying cards.. or put inside a hallmark card
Vampyress jenni
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Re: ~:*ballard of poets*:~
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 12:48:27 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking punch line. well written.
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Re: ~:*ballard of poets*:~
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 01:14:06 PM AEST
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wooooo hooooo girly this rocks it hits strong. Did this with the true art and heart of a poetess
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Re: ~:*ballard of poets*:~
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 03:10:01 PM AEST
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| Good job...got to build some courage to try the Haiku like you. Smooth. |
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Re: ~:*ballard of poets*:~
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by slay797 on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 06:05:29 PM AEST
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| hahah YES |
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Re: ~:*ballard of poets*:~
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by Butterat_Zool on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 07:25:13 PM AEST
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You certainly know how to cater to your audience... Your meaning eludes me, though. Why poets? Why the heart? You can't be claiming that love is a bane for poetry, a quick glance in these halls will disprove that. So what kills poets? Distractions? Getting busy with everyday life? Having to pay bills and giving up the freedoms that allow for creativity? "Struck" suggests an arrow to me, and an arrow in the heart suggests love... A fine aphorism. I just wish i understood. :-) Your mind is a treasure of which I have only discovered the smallest portion.
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Re: ~:*ballard of poets*:~
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 08:35:33 AM AEST
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So few words and yet so provocaitive, your writting simply woo's me away with artistic nector. What a lovely arrangement . . .
((((Nessa))))
Ben |
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Re: ~:*ballard of poets*:~
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by zenith66 on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 10:38:10 AM AEST
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such power, this is brilliant
Well done friend
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Re: ~:*ballard of poets*:~
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by colinb on
Sunday, 6th July 2014 @ 01:37:55 AM AEST
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| short poem with knock out punch |
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Re: ~:*ballard of poets*:~
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 20th October 2014 @ 09:03:24 AM AEST
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YEP! Nice one :)
~Scorp |
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