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Mystery of the Unicorn
Contributed by
SunsetDolphin12
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Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Mystic beauty of this flourishing land,
Angelic nemesis of the damned,
Shrouded by magic and ancient legend,
I’ve traveled so far to seek what doth lend,
You, dazzling princess of the moon faeries,
The art to conceal thineself in mysteries!
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SunsetDolphin12
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2003-02-27 19:20:00]
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Re: Mystery of the Unicorn
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by Percursors on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 08:08:58 PM AEST
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Re: Mystery of the Unicorn
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by kolbrun on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 05:57:21 AM AEST
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I don't know what to say, and yet I want to comment. It left me in tears, there's a start. Ever read a poem where it feels like it should of been written about yourself? that's this one.
You don't want sympathy, I know, I've been there. And I know that it's not going to be alright, so I won't tell you it will be. But things change. They get better. I swear.
This is a really good poem. I hope I get to read more of your work soon...
yours Kolbrún |
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