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THE LAST SIGH
Contributed by
brew
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Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 11:36:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Truly intiacing
Truly alured
Truly forgotten
Truly adored
She feels that all is torn
all she has is taken
never brought back
just a sharp steel prick which has taken life
Life which turns like a clock
clock with hands which go counter clockwise
"WHY"
No answers given
No answers asked
Just the simpleness
.... Again....gasp.... WHY?
Copyright ©
brew
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2007-05-22 11:36:58]
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Re: THE LAST SIGH
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by joelmuses on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 02:47:59 PM AEST
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I like it.
Quite..Driven, simple, and purposeful. |
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Re: THE LAST SIGH
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 06:44:28 AM AEST
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This has a silent...or not so silent ..power to it.
Freshly stated and portrayed! |
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Re: THE LAST SIGH
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 08:52:34 AM AEST
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a very intense poem.. so powerful
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: THE LAST SIGH
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 10:04:55 AM AEST
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Dana you are simply remarkable. Your style of writting is second only to your intensity of the words that sound more like a lost voice in the wilderness. The howl of wolf, and yet the intelligence of a suspected divinty and reverance in evey beautiful artistic opus
ou pen. Such stunning poetry, each peice posessing an ebb and flow quality.
Ben |
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Re: THE LAST SIGH
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 03:23:01 PM AEST
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| A simple statement holding so much meaning. Well done. |
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