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Walking Heaven
Contributed by
xxdeathxTOxkristixx
on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 10:27:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I am wandering
wandering the line
in which we center our
crooked lives around.
I walk my straight line
the only straight line for miles.
I look over the streching path
and wonder to myself...
where does it end?
so many other lines--
cross mine
but none are ever parallel
branching off like the limbs of a broken tree.
no one to walk next to me
on my straight unending destiny.
still wondering,
when it will end...
to reach the last--
where every light is blinding but dim,
where everything feels chaotic yet calm
all the world will smell,
--Sweet.
but the taste will always be --sour.
walk my line.
--and i'll show you where heaven is.
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xxdeathxTOxkristixx
... [
2007-05-22 10:27:12]
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Re: Walking Heaven
(User Rating: 1 )
by Nenny on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 11:25:29 AM AEST
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| great usuage but I'm a little confused on what you are talking about?? |
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Re: Walking Heaven
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by joelmuses on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 02:54:11 PM AEST
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I really enjoy the ending, nice rhythm there (or how i read it it was :)
(watch the johnny cash references though ;)) |
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