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Helpless
Contributed by
ham323
on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 07:22:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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These tears pour out.
They’re so hard to control.
Before I can hide them, down my cheeks they roll.
They pour out for reasons I thought they never would.
Reasons, I thought they never should.
Old feelings rush back again.
Ready to grasp at my arms, offer me a chair.
They tell me to sit a while, smell the familiar air.
The air is bitter and stale.
Once so comfortably real.
I feel helpless and inferior.
To those who stand superior.
I’m out of ideas and loopholes.
I sit in honest awe and astonishment.
I’m so pained with discontent.
My disbelief and ignorance.
Have been tamed by common sense.
Reality is a harsh way to learn.
It’s a slap in the face that leaves it’s mark like a burn.
I hate to rely on others to keep afloat.
A burden to load on another boat.
But how can I try to get by.
When even the ground stands taller through my eye.
I’m below sea level and carrying a weight.
I can’t let it go, this is my fate.
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ham323
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2007-05-22 07:22:05]
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Re: Helpless
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 08:06:52 AM AEST
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Beautiful work ham as always true to life and meaningful. nice writting.
thank you also for your comment.
Ben |
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Re: Helpless
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by williamdye on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 01:11:09 PM AEST
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| I can relate, good job! |
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Re: Helpless
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 08:58:57 AM AEST
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wow a very heart felt emotional poem.. so well penned out.. great job here
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