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you.....

Contributed by jackson21 on Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 10:26:50 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

you push me away as fast as you can
you look at me as though i am young in mind as well as years
you tread over my love as if it is easily given
you dismiss as though i am a mere thing that will easily forgive!
don't tread on me for i can break
don't treat me as though i could never understand
don't act above me with your riddlish ways and years of knowledge
don't preach to me about your guilt as though it makes it better!
can't you see im being torn piece from piece
can't you see that you've broken me
can't you see that i am slowly turning into what i was
can't you see what you've done, you destroyed me!
i hate being this way, don't you see that
i hate that i can't stop loving you
i hate the way that you can make me forget everything else that matters
i hate how i act around you, so pathetic!
my heart has never felt so crushed before
my heart has never fell so hard
my heart has never mourned so much
my heart has never felt so much and so numb at the same time!
i stuffed it all up from rushing it so
i destroyed any other chance by pressuring you
i have made it so now you dread my company
i have pushed away the only man i have truly loved!
stupid..... stupid little kitten!

Copyright © jackson21 ... [ 2007-05-21 22:26:50]
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Re: you..... (User Rating: 1 )
by RaineBurkhart on Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 10:51:15 PM AEST
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wow when i read your venting poem you take the words right out of me, keep writing i look forward to reading more.
RAINE

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