|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Dichotomically Yours
Contributed by
proudestmonkey
on
Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 04:49:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
You never seem to let me down.
You always seem so captivating.
Perhaps that's why I'm salivating,
For a brief chance of decapitating,
The part of your head deactivating
Your normal thinking process.
But then, I picture your face,
A colorful spark among the gray,
A Mother Theresa among child molesters,
A Marilyn Monroe among Marilyn Mansons,
The single star of a hopeless night sky.
Your lips, so red like seething stoplights-
But your green eyes tell me to ease off the brake.
And I don't know what to do,
Because I've reached the point of no return,
Yet a stern, policing eye is fixated on my vehicle
Daring me to cross through the yellow-
Which of course is an extension of the red.
When I look into your eyes, I see
An endless mystery,
A peakless pinnacle,
A rootless tree,
A ruthless vigor,
An untamed chi,
A sense that's forgotten,
A sense that's free.
While I admit that I've had visions of stabbing a tent stake into the inner realms of your colon,
I also admit that I am a fool.
Copyright ©
proudestmonkey
... [
2007-05-21 16:49:42]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Dichotomically Yours
(User Rating: 1 )
by scrivonel on
Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 09:08:23 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I thought this poem was pretty good, interesting and fun to read...it flowed real nicely... |
|
|
Re: Dichotomically Yours
(User Rating: 1 )
by Adreana on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 07:45:35 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| What a cool freakin write!! Love your use of words and rhythm. Love the last line. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
