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Lovers
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 06:32:48 AM in AEST
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Don't you remember, my love
How sweet it was...
Like the sweetest nectar, baby
First time we met
Two people destined for ecstasy
Eyes locked, mood set
Conversation begins
It felt like finding someone
Who we'd loss
We both believe we had known
Each other in a previous life
Or perhaps a parallel universe?
Long lost lover
Genuine friend
Past life encounterers
Finding one another, again
Lovers for eternity
Changelings over ions of time
Lovers who are connected
Lovers of gentle sweet
Rhythm and rhyme
Sweetness of taste
Emblazed upon lips
Like fine wine...
Aged over time
Penned 2005 for Damon
Laura Horner
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deadheadpoet
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2007-05-21 06:32:48]
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Re: Lovers
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 09:58:09 AM AEST
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Sweetie, your love and commitment is so completely beautiful.
You are a woman to be admired, not only for your devotion and
strength of will, but also your endless talent. When you write, it
seems as if your words speak directly to me at times.
Soft, gentle, open and generous ... just a magnificent write
all in all. Gorgeous words, sis.
~MG |
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Re: Lovers
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by Nenny on
Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 11:27:44 AM AEST
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| good word usage..good read!! |
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Re: Lovers
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 11:39:03 AM AEST
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This really beautifull, my friend.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Lovers
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 04:45:03 PM AEST
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Sis,
this is so real, no mush just plain out right honest, speaking from your heart.
Michelle |
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Re: Lovers
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 11:56:42 AM AEST
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*hugs tight*
There are many beautiful things in your marriage, Laura. Even through everything else, don't forget that. This proves it.
You can get through anything, hun. I know that. I can see your strength, all the way from here. And you know... if you need a friend, you can lean on me.
A lovely poem, sweetie. Please remember it.
*huge hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Lovers
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 12:00:30 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful, loving and sweet:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Lovers
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by Loende on
Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 05:49:58 AM AEST
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It's really a beautiful piece. May your love abound.
Be well,
Loende |
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