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LOVE ‘N’ HATE
Contributed by
FRANCO
on
Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 01:01:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Afar form the hell I dwell
Ho, how I love to be lying
on her lap near an icy
mountain creek, gazing at
the brilliant dark sky
dotted with flickering sparkles
of tiny stars like a heavenly bells,
ringing a code of nature’s mystery,
hard not to read its content.
Synchronized drum beats by the
burning twigs in my teeny campfire
blending with the blowing flow of breeze
through the tall humming
grasses, a sheer symphony staged
elegantly by nature - I lay
on her lap listening to the
concert staged for my ears only.
Ho, how I love ‘O’ mother nature,
how I love thee.
Back home the hell where I dwell in the midst of
roaring horror filled automobiles,
blaring dreadful music forced down my ears,
poisoned air to breathe, drifting rootless
robotic selfish human on their
mindless chaotic rush. Hookers and muggers,
drug peddlers and pimps at every
nook and corners like a wild starving
wolves ready to chomp through bit
and pieces of my precious life.
Yes, here is a jungle a concrete jungle -
one abhors another - refuse to share ‘n’ mingle.
Ho, how hate this hell I dwell,
how I hate thee.
-FRANCO-
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2007-05-21 01:01:39]
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Re: LOVE ‘N’ HATE
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by GingerB on
Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 05:40:43 AM AEST
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Well done, Franco!
Oh, the poem's great too. :>)
Ginny. |
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Re: LOVE ‘N’ HATE
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 10:43:06 AM AEST
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Franco, this was such a bittersweet write. The first stanza caught
me and danced me into a beautiful enchantment. How lovely to
sit in Mother nature's lap, feeling the calm and serenity of sight and
sound . . .. *sigh* I could almost smell that fresh mountain air.
but the second stanza slaps us back to reality where we definitely
wish to be freed from. Still . .. . it's moments like in your beginning words
that make life worth living, yes? To grab all of life's beauty and wonder; now
THAT is one heck of a noble pursuit.
Thank you for sharing this, my dear friend. It's magnificent poetry.
~Breezy |
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Re: LOVE ‘N’ HATE
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 11:01:07 AM AEST
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This is simply beautifull.
i don't know who she is but she is lucky to have you and vise versa.
big huggs,
emy |
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Re: LOVE ‘N’ HATE
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 03:36:33 PM AEST
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| Always the alpha and omega of life haunts us. To take time away to the call of nature and be at peace like the animals that dwell here oh yes I can imagine the serenity and peace. Well done my friend. May the hell turn to heaven as I speak. |
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Re: LOVE ‘N’ HATE
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 31st May 2007 @ 03:57:47 AM AEST
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The part you wrote: a concrete jungle
Made me think of the song by Black Label Society "Concrete Jungle".. But anyways.. This was a beautifully written piece of literature right there! You did such an amazing job and it flowed so smoothly... It was truly amazing.. Well done.
Take care
Christina
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