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Time...
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Sunday, 20th May 2007 @ 05:18:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Time...
It seems to creep on and up
It seems to come so quick
but too slow
Seasons change
Everything changes with
Time...
Growing older every day
Breathing another breath
is just a breath away
You see the signs written
in lines on your face
Time...
It exists but it doesn't
It is real and it is unreal
Forever and never
A journey of unspeakable quests
So much going on in
Time...
I've lost it before
more than once
Days in bed
Depression filled the head
Minutes melted into dream
Time...
Isn't it time for peace
forgiveness of oneself
and their indignant needs?
I do feel so lost
So miniscule in this thing called
Time...
5-10-07
Laura Horner
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Re: Time...
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 20th May 2007 @ 10:13:09 PM AEST
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It is time
to tell you
your flow is excellent..... |
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Re: Time...
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 11:54:12 AM AEST
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It's funny... I found myself getting lost in this poem, Laura. I don't know why, but it opens up my mind, and makes me think, and for a second there I went off into my own world.
I love the style of this, it's different to your usual masterpieces.
I'm glad I dropped by.
Miss you hun.
Love,
Phil xxx |
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Re: Time...
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 12:37:18 PM AEST
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a very good thing to remember every time we think we can walk on water, time; we are as you said, miniscule, time always wins, we are but a speck...
so humbling isnt it?
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Time...
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by funnyface09 on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 07:49:47 PM AEST
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great piece there..
how time changes and flies...and we have no control over it...
thanks for sharing |
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