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This Final Moment

Contributed by aCellarDoor on Sunday, 20th May 2007 @ 12:48:52 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

This Final Moment

The glass shined like diamonds
In the glare of the fire
You shielded your eyes from the sight
Holding onto their last hope in this world
Bodies free fell from the towers up above

And it was all we had (3xs)

And so I sat there an wondered
“Will we be here tomorrow?”
And I didn’t know your name
But I stayed there just the same
There was nothing I could do
But watch the world with you

The buildings toppled over
But the bombs silenced the sound
As the glass shattered one last time
And the sky erupted in flames
And I couldn’t see a thing
But I still could feel your hand in mine

And it was all we had (3xs)

And so I sat there an wondered...
There was nothing I could do
But watch the world with you

And so we fell asleep to
The sound of breaking glass
Because
That was all we had (4xs)

And it was all we had (3xs)

And so I sat there an wondered...
There was nothing I could do
But watch the world with you

Copyright Â© aCellarDoor ... [ 2007-05-20 12:48:52]
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Re: This Final Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 05:47:47 AM AEST
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sad and with great depth.

The rythmn is well done too.

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