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The Railing
Contributed by
trueecho
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Sunday, 20th May 2007 @ 05:19:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Each railing holds a story
More than just your weight
The railing holds fears, wishes, thoughts and dreams
We use it to lean on
Just in case...
A silent resovoir of training wheels
A different one for each person
Living in a house
If we took the railing away
How would we get down the stairs?
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trueecho
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2007-05-20 05:19:44]
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Re: The Railing
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by darcy5450 on
Sunday, 20th May 2007 @ 09:56:06 AM AEST
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| I like this poem! If only the railing could talk...oh the things I'm sure it has seen. :) |
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Re: The Railing
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by zenmind on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 06:52:49 AM AEST
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Interesting metaphore! Very subtle. I love it. I love how it touches upon the frailties, insecurities, and vulnerability that each of us often feels, yet is afraid to admit or disclose them. I like how it accepts these frailties, not as limitiations, but as just a necessary aspect of life.
Be True,
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