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WALK AWAY
Contributed by
MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 02:28:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I DON'T WANT TO SAY GOODBYE
NEVER MENT TO MAKE YOU CRY
BUT NOTHING I SAY
NOTHING I CAN DO
CAN KEEP ME LOVING YOU
DON'T WANT TO FALL APART
DON'T WANT TO LOSE YOUR LOVE
BUT BABY YOU HAD YOUR CHANCE
THIS WAS OUR ONE LAST LOVERS DANCE
SO JUST TAKE YOUR LOVE AND GO
JUST LEAVE ME HERE TO STAY
DON'T TAKE ME FAR AWAY
JUST PLEASE JUST WALK AWAY
I KNOW WE HAD OUR TIMES
BUT TIME WILL ALWAYS CHANGE
THE FEELINGS WE HAVE HAD
ARE DEAD AND BURIED NOW
DON'T GIVE ME THAT GUILTY LOOK
I KNOW THAT'S HOW YOU WORK
SO PLEASE JUST LEAVE ME BE
SO JUST TAKE YOUR LOVE AND GO
JUST LEAVE ME HERE TO STAY
DON'T TAKE MY LIFE AWAY
PLEASE SLOWELY WALK AWAY
DON'T BREAK MY HEART AGAIN
YOU DON'T HAVE TO UNDERSTAND
THIS LOVE I FELT FOR YOU
HAS SLOWELY DRIFTED AWAY
NOW PLEASE JUST WALK AWAY
I KNOW YOU WANT TO STAY
BUT OUR LOVE HAS WENT ASTRAY
PLEASE TAKE YOUR LOVE AND GO
JUST LEAVE ME HERE ALONE
DON'T TRY TO STAY WITH ME
JUST SLOWELY WALK AWAY
PLEASE JUST WALK AWAY
THERE'S NOTHING HERE FOR YOU
JUST WALK AWAY !!!!!!!!!!
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MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
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2007-05-19 14:28:49]
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Re: WALK AWAY
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by madhusudan on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 05:08:20 PM AEST
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| Just a comment...i know its a poem and might not voice your own thoughts...but if a person wants the other to walk away..is there no chance of him./ her reverthin their stance on a later date? or should the one who is hurt just move on...and not keep any hope!!! |
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Re: WALK AWAY
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by Shadow on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 06:30:39 PM AEST
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| i can imagine music to this honestly. It has a soft rock feel. As a poem, it strays from the traditional form a bit which in my opinion gives it a unique flare. I enjoyed the emotion beind it. Though i was sad about there being little imagry, though in truth, the poem didn't need it. It got the message across clear and loud and and a wonderful flow to it. All in all, good write and you should look into making it a song |
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Re: WALK AWAY
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by brew on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 06:42:06 AM AEST
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Well walking away sometimes makes it easier to deal with....hm good point (mad )poet made, yet.....thats a question for ones' inner feelings to ask ones self..IF you really LOVE the person, as "being in love" and they are worth fighting for.....then DO IT! Loved the words, could feel what one is going through..
Love and hugs
Brew~ |
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