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Can......
Contributed by
RaineBurkhart
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Friday, 18th May 2007 @ 10:22:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Can my life get better? or is it gonna stay?
Can i start again? or will it go away?
Can i ask you something? Why did God choose me?
Can i take it back? or will it always be?
Can i find my friends? Why did i have to leave them to come here?
Can i stop this hurting? Who will wipe away my tears?
Can they make me happy? Then why am i so sad?
Can you tell me exactly why? why i am so mad
Can you take my life? cause i don't want to live
Can you tell me why i left? now i have my life to give
Can you tell my mommy that i will be okay
I'll be waiting for her and see her soon one day
Can't somebody here me? Promise me, you won't cry
Cause it was my decision , it was my choice to die
Can you promise something, please smile when i go
I should have told you how i felt in my heart,
I guess you'll never know,
Can you understand me? i'm sorry but it's true,
i could handle all the ***** that i was going through
My spirit inside was captured , but i've just set it free,
Tell everyone i'm sorry, but if you would only see,
Abuse is really painful, i couldn't take the pain,
Don't forget i'll wait right here
To see you once again,
I love you for your friendship,
Promise not to cry,
I'll see you in another life, I love you and good-bye!
Copyright ©
RaineBurkhart
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2007-05-18 22:22:22]
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Re: Can......
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 08:22:55 AM AEST
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Hoping you be around ..
Blessing |
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Re: Can......
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 11:04:38 AM AEST
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Raine,
Dear sweet one, I won't say good-by, because I'll be down to your house if you think of leaving, you're too young to feel like this, life has so much to offer, and you are very beautiful, besides who would talk to 'casey" she missed you, and dallas, tippy, lasko, krystal, nathan, and of course travis, we all love you, !!!! Valerie |
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Re: Can......
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by jackson21 on
Saturday, 19th May 2007 @ 12:19:22 PM AEST
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awwwww!!!!!! even though this one is very sad cause no one should ever have to feel that way, that was one of the most beautiful poems i've ever read! Please don't go and leave this world, because it would be alot darker without you here! Sounds like your friends truly care about you, maybe you should listen to what they have to say! All the best, hoping your light won't dimmer for that would be a terrible shame!
Jack! |
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Re: Can......
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by afropoet on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2007 @ 11:13:38 PM AEST
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| you are good I must say we should definitely get to meet and pick each others brains what do you say? |
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